Once I love you..
I enjoy being with you..

And after some time,

I hate you.
I feel bored being with you.

You force me to close the FaceBook window..
and ask me to go and study..

Only a few people on Gtalk,
May be because of you..

You make everything around me fine..
When I’m inside..

And sometimes….
You confuse all my plans..
I will blame you..
What have you done to me!

When you are always with me,
It makes me annoying..
You don’t let me go anywhere..
You don’t let me do what I want..

And when you are not with me,
I may feel like crying..
I feel uneasy..
It’s too boring..
Without you……….


17 Comments

chirantha · May 18, 2010 at 10:34 pm

hee hee nice bro……
Sanjaya mokada me wela thiyennee

කණිෂ්ක · May 18, 2010 at 10:46 pm

වැස්සට මොලේ පොඟලාද මන්දා….. 😀

Upeshala · May 18, 2010 at 10:48 pm

Perfect Macho…..

Sanjaya · May 18, 2010 at 10:52 pm

He he…..
Thanks.
And it’s open for u all to guess

මාධව · May 18, 2010 at 10:54 pm

Sometimes you may feel that
If “X” is not with you, you are alone and
You can’t spend your time without “X”…..
But always think….
Although “X” didn’t think of you,
Someone who loves you always wishs your happy….
You should spend your time for them….
It is a must……

(“X” refers to “you” in your words)

dinu · May 18, 2010 at 10:55 pm

nice !! its really true !! 😀
nice work !!

Aruni · May 18, 2010 at 11:02 pm

It’s really nice

Darshana · May 18, 2010 at 11:03 pm

මටත් හිතෙන්නෙ හොඳටම තෙමිලා වගේ මේ ළමයා…..
කවුද මේ අපි නොදන්න X නමැති පුද්ගලයා….. 😉

ඉන්දික ගුණතිලක · May 18, 2010 at 11:07 pm

Excellent………….
i though, u thing over past but dear it is happed.now we can not change. we must have remembered past so valuable things was happened because those are very important to change our life to correct way as well as matter of fact was happened at the past,we must have forgotten because those are not important to our life. those things,we remember again and again our maid is gone wrong way therefore better thing is done, all the bad things was happened at the past is forgotten.

Sanjaya · May 19, 2010 at 8:05 pm

Thank you all for your comments. Anyone can think in anyway. I appreciate all your imaginations.
Well I’m going to say what this is all about. It’s not the thing what all of you have thought of.

This is about,
“THE RAIN”

Have you ever thought of that? 🙂

And so my dear friends think u got the value of X i think 🙂

However it’s still open for any one to talk about what you think of this Free Verse.

Thanks a lot pals………

    මාධව · May 19, 2010 at 8:16 pm

    අනේ අපරාදෙ කියන්න බැහැ…. මට නම් ඔහොම හිතුනේ නැහැ… අර කලින් කට්ටිය කිව්ව වගේ වැස්සට තෙමුන නිසා ලියන්න හිතෙන්න ඇති අපේ සංජයට….

Nisala · May 20, 2010 at 8:31 pm

මම මේකෙ සාහිත්‍යමය වශයෙන් කොච්චර අනර්ඝ නිර්මාණයක්ද නම් දන්නෙ නෑ. මොකද මම එච්චර ඉන්ග්‍රීසි නිසඳැස් කියෝල නැති නිසා, නමුත් මේ වාක්‍ය ටික නම් නියමයි….

    Sanjaya · May 20, 2010 at 8:36 pm

    ස්තුතියි ප්‍රතිචාරයට

chirantha · May 22, 2010 at 10:20 am

aah….ape Sanjaya kala karayek wela ne aa….. niyamai Sanjaya….carry on..

    Sanjaya · May 22, 2010 at 10:26 am

    Thanks a lot.
    Mata ehema loku hekiyawak nehe. Nikan hithuna liwwa….

    Mata mewa (non-tech things) liannai kiala upades dun ayata uge comment eka dakkama sathutu hithei mama hithanne……

uthpala · August 21, 2010 at 8:33 am

really nice creation.

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